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Thursday, July 1, 2021

Announcing My July 2021 Project: The Mystery of the Body Thief

 


A while ago I mentioned that I finished writing the first draft of this novel. This July, I am focusing on editing it and working on the second draft, along with some world-building along the way. 

For this project I started writing the first draft in 2018 and finished it in 2020.  I made a lot of posts about this novel in the past, so if you want to check them out, here you can, or if you can to look at posts about the series as a whole here you can. 

Synopsis-

Genre: Fantasy | Murder Mystery 

Horatio wakes up from being in a coma, but he doesn't remember anything that happened before he fell into unconsciousness. All that he remembers is a name, "Annabelle!" 

Also... Detective Inspector Time finds himself having to solve a case without Lady Annabelle.
Murders have been happening throughout many different kingdoms, and no one knows who exactly is behind it all. 

Characters- 

Here are the characters. Please note, many things have changed. Phillip, the dwarf guard character  from the first draft moved to later book, given that the time-line changed a lot. (The dwarf and elf war happens much later). Also since Phillip is not coming in until later, I replaced him for now with a character named Angela. I had created her character for All is Not Lost For All Will Begin Again, but that setting and story changed, too. Angela didn't fit the story anymore, so I moved her to The Mystery of the Body Thief instead. 

There are other characters who appear later in the story, but I won't be including them in this post. In this post, I am including the characters who have the largest impact on the plot: 

                                                         Horatio 



A servant who works in the castle, who lost his memory. He has a connection to Annabelle, but what the connection is, he doesn't know, but he longs to find out. 

                                                     Ophelia 



She is one of  Horatio's few friends and one of the healers at the castle. She works with the Earth and Air Gods and learns her magic from them. She is a very sweet (but quiet) person. 

                                                    Lady Annabelle 



Lady Annabelle is a princess, who is in a coma, who fell unconscious at the same time as Horatio. Before she was in a coma, she worked as a detective and sometimes would work with D.I. Time and Marigold. 


                                                Detective Inspector Time 



An old friend of Annabelle's, he is a detective actively working on the case of the murdered royals. 

                                                    Marigold Time 



Marigold is also working on the case of the murders of royalty, and is the adoptive daughter of D.I. Time. She also works as a detective in the police department. 

                                                           Vonivera 



Lady Annabelle's lady in waiting, she is a friend to Horatio and a frenemy of "Angie." Unlike the other ladies in the castle, Vonivera is a fairy and she finds it odd to be amongst elves and humans. 

                                                          Angela "Angie" 



    Another one of Lady Annabelle's ladies in waiting, Angela is "a close friend" of Vonivera's (or at least that is what she tells people).

Soundtrack- 

I compiled a playlist of music that I listen to while writing this story. I decided to make a different playlist for the second draft, because it is neat to look back and listen to music that I listened to when writing the first draft of this novel. 

                              My Goal- 

Since I'm on the second draft, my goal is going to be edit/rewrite at least 12,000 words. I made my goal smaller because, editing is really hard and I don't want to make myself stressed with a large goal. There are also a lot of things that have changed in the plot-line, so getting those changes into the story, along with the world-building is very important in this second draft. While it may not be perfect, I have the third draft to fix those flaws. 

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Are you participating in Camp NaNoWriMo this July? If so what are you writing? 
-Quinley 

9 comments:

  1. Quinley, this sounds super intriguing! All the best for NaNoWriMo!!!!

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  2. Ooh, this sounds so interesting! Good luck with your editing.

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  3. Yay, another Camp Nano participant! I'm writing my (since March) WIP and it's REALLY long - like it's @ 72k right now and I'm only quarter through it, haha. Good luck! (We're going to need it!)

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    1. Yes! That's awesome. :D What's your WIP about? That's awesome that you've been working on it for that long, and good luck to you too. :)
      -Quinley

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  4. WOW, this is so cool!!!! I LOVED the pictures of your characters and reading more about them! Also, the name Detective Inspector Time is AWESOME!!! I hope you got a lot of progress done on editing your story during Nano! :D

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    1. Thank you. :) I'm glad you enjoyed reading about my characters. :) Oh thank you I'm glad you like D.I. Time's name, there is actually a funny story behind it, I accidentally named him "Time" when I meant for his last name to be "Thyme" but I suppose it was a happy mistake. :D

      I did, thank you. :)
      -Quinley

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    2. Awwww, anytime!!! Oh my goodness, that's hilarious! XD I love it when mistakes like that end up changing novels in a good way! ;)

      You're so welcome!

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